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Give me one festival in your hometown that you enjoy the most.

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I like festval is Seoul rose festival.
Because i like roses.
You can see roses in here and take pictures.

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Hi Emma! ^^

That sounds like a fun festival! Festivals are really great. People gather together to celebrate and have a good time. Hopefully, this virus would be gone so that we can go back to enjoying it again. 

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I like festval is Seoul rose festival.
>> I like the Rose festival in Seoul because I like roses. 

Because i like roses.
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You can see roses in here and take pictures.
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