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What are the good effects and bad effects of junk food?

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First, the benefits of junk food...
1. It is a great help in replenishing energy for busy students.
2. You don't have to spend a lot of time buying and eating, so you can save a time.
The downside of junk food...
1. You gain weight easily.
2. Your memory become bad.
3. Most of the products are packaged as processed food or frozen food. Therefore, it causes a lot of environmental pollution.

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Hi there Maria!

All of these answers as well as those we have discussed in class are absolutely correct! If all junk foods are bad, then why do they still sell them in the market? We can enjoy a bad of chips sometimes but not every time. Most of all, drink lots of water!

Thanks for this homework answer. See you in class again tomorrow. 

-T. Donna =)

First, the benefits of junk food...
>> Correct!
Or: First, the benefits of junk food:

1. It is a great help in replenishing energy for busy students.
>> Correct!

2. You don't have to spend a lot of time buying and eating, so you can save a time.
>> You don't have to spend a lot of time buying and eating, so you can save time.

The downside of junk food...
>> Correct!
Or: The downside of junk food:

1. You gain weight easily.
>> Correct!

2. Your memory become bad.
>> Your memory becomes bad.

3. Most of the products are packaged as processed food or frozen food. Therefore, it causes a lot of environmental pollution.
>> Correct!
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