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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?

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If I work with a person who is very different from me, there is a lot of advetages and disadventages.
First, I can find some adventages of the person so I can get his or her adventages.
But I can be very confuse or maybe I can't agree with the person's opinion.
So there are a lot of adventages and disadventages of doing that.

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Hi John! ^^

Some people prefer to work individually and others in teams. Both have advantages and disadvantages. The key is finding the rights tasks for each one despite the difference in personality. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

If I work with a person who is very different from me, there is a lot of advetages and disadventages.
>>If I work with a person who is very different from me, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages.

First, I can find some adventages of the person so I can get his or her adventages.
>> First is that I can find some advantages of that person so I can use it. 

But I can be very confuse or maybe I can't agree with the person's opinion.
>> Although we can get confused or disagree most of the time because we have different opinions. 

So there are a lot of adventages and disadventages of doing that.
>>So there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages to that. 
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