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Why do people sometimes feel afraid to express their real emotions?

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Why do people sometimes feel afraid to express their real emotions?

In order to my expression of real emotion, people is feared to reveals their dark side.
In my case, it is difficult to expressing my feelings someone else.
Because of direct expression of emotions, I know someone is hurting.
We need to be careful and do consideration for other people.

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Hi Monica! ^^

Emotions are part of our everyday lives. Sometimes, it can feel like our feelings control how we think and act to the point where we feel like we¡¯re not in control. Experiencing and expressing emotions are integral parts of life. But, for many people, emotions remain mysterious, confusing, and difficult to express constructively. This brochure provides information about learning to incorporate emotions into your life in healthy ways, including how to express them in ways that are conducive to building healthy relationships.

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In order to my expression of real emotion, people is feared to reveals their dark side.
>>One of the reasons why people are afraid to express their real emotions is that it may reveal their dark side. 

In my case, it is difficult to expressing my feelings someone else.
>>In my case, it is difficult to express my feelings someone else.

Because of direct expression of emotions, I know someone is hurting.
>> When I say my direct emotions, I may hurt other people. 

We need to be careful and do consideration for other people.
>> We need to be careful and considerate towards other people. 
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