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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?

Actually, I prefer to working with similar people.
It is comfortable working for me with working the way and communication.
To work a person who is very different from me, it will be a good experience for me and learn about working the way.
I don¡¯t want to experience that.

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Hi Monica! ^^

Some people prefer to work individually and others in teams. Both have advantages and disadvantages. The key is finding the rights tasks for each one despite the difference in personality. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon
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Actually, I prefer to working with similar people.
>> Actually, I prefer to work with similar people.

It is comfortable working for me with working the way and communication.
>> It is comfortable to work with people where you are comfortable communicating with. 

To work a person who is very different from me, it will be a good experience for me and learn about working the way.
>> Working with a person who is different from me may be a good experience and I will learn at the same time. 

I don¡¯t want to experience that.
>> Although I don't want to experience that.
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