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To be honest, I like fairy tales better than reality. In fairy tales, world is so pretty, the environment is clean, and everything you want comes true. Also, there are animals that have magic, can fly, and exist only in the imagination. It has everything you can imagine, so no matter how old you are, you can't hate it. Conversely, the reality is that there is no magic, the world is not clean, and you have to keep studying and be in the eyes of people in high positions to get a good job and stand in a good position. Maybe other people have the same thoughts as me. It's because they were all the same because they had to receive infusion education from a young age and get good grades in exams.

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Hello Maria!

Indeed, fairy tale is better. However, we have to accept the fact that our reality is far from the fantasy world. It is actually exactly the opposite! So let us be happy and make a fairy tale out of our real world instead.

See you in class tomorrow!

-T. Donna =)

To be honest, I like fairy tales better than reality. 
>> Correct!

In fairy tales, world is so pretty, the environment is clean, and everything you want comes true. 
>> Correct!

Also, there are animals that have magic, can fly, and exist only in the imagination. 
>> Correct!

It has everything you can imagine, so no matter how old you are, you can't hate it. 
>> Correct!

Conversely, the reality is that there is no magic, the world is not clean, and you have to keep studying and be in the eyes of people in high positions to get a good job and stand in a good position. 
>> Correct!

Maybe other people have the same thoughts as me. 
>> Correct!

It's because they were all the same because they had to receive infusion education from a young age and get good grades in exams.
>> Correct!
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