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I'm not sure yet.

If I am the middle child. There will be good things and bad things will happen. If I have a little brother or sister, I can't control everthing.We have to give way to each other. and There's a part where you need to share your parents' love... But I will be not bored.

I've never been a middle child, so I don't know yet.
But sometimes I want to be a middle child.

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Hello Jenny,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



I'm not sure yet.
>>> CORRECT

If I am the middle child. There will be good things and bad things will happen. 
>>> If I am the middle child then there will be good things and bad things that might happen. 

If I have a little brother or sister, I can't control everthing.
>>> If I have a little brother or little sister, I can't control everything.

We have to give way to each other. 
>>> CORRECT

and There's a part where you need to share your parents' love... But I will be not bored.
>>> And there's a part where we need to share our parents' love but on the contrary, I will not be bored. 

I've never been a middle child, so I don't know yet.
>>> CORRECT

But sometimes I want to be a middle child.
>>> CORRECT
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