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How is English and other languages different from Korean?

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2021-07-08 587

회원님의 영작문

Korean is shorter than other languages.
Korean's one letter is that some consonants and vowels gather.
So I'm not sure It is easy to learn.
It hardly have strong official intonation like Chinese, (although there are official ones, all about people don't use.)
but It has nonofficial intonation. The intonations make have different mean.
Therefore, same sentences have a variety of means.
For example, "그래"'s simple mean is 'okay' or 'yes', questionable tone same 'really?', and strong accent is used in to suddenly make a good idea.
Korean has some dialect, the people leaved in south place don't like or feel shy when they hear standard language.
When I rode a subway in Busan which is most advanced city among south cites in Korea, I talked to my friend using a standard language, so some older people looked at me.
However, Korean is not more overly different between the dialects.
People who use dialect can converse with the people who use different dialect without problem.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang!

Diligence and patience while learning will be your friends as you improve yourself.  Practice the sentences which were suggested. ^^


-T. Maine


Korean is shorter than other languages.

>>Correct.
 Korean's one letter is that some consonants and vowels gather.

>>Korean's one alphabet is equivalent to combined consonants and vowels.
 So I'm not sure It is easy to learn.

>>So I'm not sure if it is easy to learn my language.
 It hardly have strong official intonation like Chinese, (although there are official ones, all about people don't use.)

>>It hardly has a strong official intonation like Chinese.
 but It has nonofficial intonation. The intonations make have different mean.

>>But it has a nonofficial intonation as well.  The intonations make different meanings.
 Therefore, same sentences have a variety of means.

>>Therefore, the same sentences have various of meanings.
 For example, "그래"'s simple mean is 'okay' or 'yes', questionable tone same 'really?', and strong accent is used in to suddenly make a good idea.

>>For example, "그래" simply means okay or yes.  But the questionable tone of it may mean "really?" and a strong accent is used to express a good idea.
 Korean has some dialect, the people leaved in south place don't like or feel shy when they hear standard language.

>>Koreans have some dialects, too.  People who live in the southern part don't feel shy when they listen to the standard language.
 When I rode a subway in Busan which is most advanced city among south cites in Korea, I talked to my friend using a standard language, so some older people looked at me.

>>When I rode a subway in Busan, which is the most advanced city among the cities in South Korea, I talked to my friend using the standard language.  So some people stared at me.
 However, Korean is not more overly different between the dialects.

>>However, Korean is not totally different from their dialects.
 People who use dialect can converse with the people who use different dialect without problem.

>>People who use their own dialect can converse with people who use different dialects without any problems.

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