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To rebut the opinions of others, the princess is not always kind and docile, and no matter how great a book is, even a 6 or 7 year old will not understand it properly. Unless you're a genius like Einstein, even if you read at a young age, you'll have to enter elementary school to fully understand it. When you are young, you have to have the right mindset and the right mind, and teach them how to be just in bad things, wisdom, faith, hope, love, etc., so that they can become a good child when they grow up. It is this fairy tale that helps you to have them well. The characters in the children's book may of course detract from the children's sense of reality, but this is only temporary, and in elementary school everything will be fine. Rather, I assure you that fairy tales like this will become an opportunity to develop children's creativity and imagination.

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Hi Maria!

You are absolutely correct. As we grow older and the fairy tale effect on us fades, we should never forget the values of faith, hope, love, kindness, sincerity, etc. We have to show that we have learned them and we are also capable of the prince and princess-like characters.

I appreciate your answer, excellent job!

-T. Donna =)

To rebut the opinions of others, the princess is not always kind and docile, and no matter how great a book is, even a 6 or 7 year old will not understand it properly.
>> Correct!

 Unless you're a genius like Einstein, even if you read at a young age, you'll have to enter elementary school to fully understand it. 
>> Correct!

When you are young, you have to have the right mindset and the right mind, and teach them how to be just in bad things, wisdom, faith, hope, love, etc., so that they can become a good child when they grow up. 
>> Correct!

It is this fairy tale that helps you to have them well. 
>> Correct!

The characters in the children's book may of course detract from the children's sense of reality, but this is only temporary, and in elementary school everything will be fine. 
>> Correct!

Rather, I assure you that fairy tales like this will become an opportunity to develop children's creativity and imagination.
>> Correct!
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