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What is the best reason why people get a pet in your country nowadays?

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Well, here in South Korea, a lot of people get pets like dogs, cats and even uncommon animals as their specific reasons but I think the best reason would be the mind about their pets. Honestly, in the past, there was not an awareness of pets so many have pets as their guardians of their homes and the like. However, with development with the developed counties' relationships like the USA we had noticed that having a pet is really crucial when it comes to living with them well. So, we have found that pets are really important presents to live sweetly and smoothly. Apart from that, they give us a great pleasure in many ways. Additionally, in the case of one person household, for them, a pet is a precious family so that they do not feel loneliness to some extent.

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Hello there Jane!

As we have been heavily influenced by the Americans, we take care of our pets like one of our family members. Why not? Before, we would eat dogs like how we eat chicken and hogs. As time went my, we change our practices and adopt ways from others that we find good and fitting in our own norms.

So send my best regards to Bong, your angel dog! Thanks for this answer to my question.

See you next week!

-T. Donna =)

Well, here in South Korea, a lot of people get pets like dogs, cats and even uncommon animals as their specific reasons but I think the best reason would be the mind about their pets. 
>> Correct!

Honestly, in the past, there was not an awareness of pets so many have pets as their guardians of their homes and the like. 
>> Honestly, in the past, there was not an awareness of pets. So many have pets as their guardians at homes and the like. 

However, with development with the developed counties' relationships like the USA we had noticed that having a pet is really crucial when it comes to living with them well. 
>> However, with the development of countries' relationships like the USA, we had noticed that having a pet is really crucial when it comes to living with them well

So, we have found that pets are really important presents to live sweetly and smoothly. 
>> So, we have found  out that pets are really important presents to live sweetly and smoothly. 

Apart from that, they give us a great pleasure in many ways. 
>> Correct!

Additionally, in the case of one person household, for them, a pet is a precious family so that they do not feel loneliness to some extent.
>> Additionally, in the case of one person's household, for them, a pet is a precious family so that they do not feel loneliness to some extent.
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