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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Dear. Teacher Maine

작성자: 이*현
2021-07-09 216

회원님의 영작문

Today is the final class in this month, because I should concentrate on studying chemistry until this month.
I'm going to restart this program after my summer semester.
It will start in August, but I may not be able to entry your class.
Therefore, I wanted to say goodbye in today class, but we had not enough time.
It is why I write this letter.
I'm lucky student because I took your class.
I love your energy, and smile as well as your skillful ability about English.
I can't find the teacher like you. You made me happy in all your class.
I was feeling better and happy after the class, so I have positive condition thanks to you during weekdays.
I even waited weekdays in weekends.
You made English become enjoyable for me.
Even if the period is just one month, I feel like we're friend.
I wish to learn to you again when I come back. I'll try to do.
I hope you think that this class became good memory, like me.
Thank you very much indeed!
Be happy always! Watch out the virus!
See you again :)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang!

Thank you for this message. Remember to surround yourself with English.  I hope to see you again soon.  Take care! :)


-T. Maine


Today is the final class in this month, because I should concentrate on studying chemistry until this month.

>>Today is the final class this month because I should concentrate studying Chemistry until the end of this month.
 I'm going to restart this program after my summer semester.

>>Correct.
 It will start in August, but I may not be able to entry your class.

>>It will start in August, but I think I may not be able to enter your class again.
 Therefore, I wanted to say goodbye in today class, but we had not enough time.

>>Therefore, I wanted to say goodbye, but we did not have enough time.
 It is why I write this letter.

>>That is why I wrote this letter.
 I'm lucky student because I took your class.

>>I'm a lucky student because I took your class.
 I love your energy, and smile as well as your skillful ability about English.

>>I love your energy, smile, and your ability in using English.
 I can't find the teacher like you. You made me happy in all your class.

>>I can't find another teacher like you.  You truly made me happy in our classes.
 I was feeling better and happy after the class, so I have positive condition thanks to you during weekdays.

>>I felt better and happy after our class, so I became optimistic on weekdays.  Thanks to you. 
 I even waited weekdays in weekends.

>>I enen waited for weekdays on weekends.
 You made English become enjoyable for me.

>>You made English enjoyable for me.
 Even if the period is just one month, I feel like we're friend.

>>Even if the period is just a month, I feel like we've met for a long time as friends.
 I wish to learn to you again when I come back. I'll try to do.

>>I wish to study in your class again when I come back.  I will try.
 I hope you think that this class became good memory, like me.

>>I hope you think that this class is a good memory, too.
 Thank you very much indeed!

>>Indeed, thank you very much!
 Be happy always! Watch out the virus!

>>Be happy always!  Watch out of the virus!
 See you again :)

>>Correct! :)

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