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HOMEWORK:
What foods have you tasted which you will never forget for the rest of your life?
When I was 6 years old, my aunt always came to my house to take care of me because my parents went to work every day.
She always made side dishes for all 3meals, send me to kindergarten every morning, and did almost every house chore.

One day, she gave me an unknown snack that she made.
It smelled like an artificial banana, the color was brown, steaming, and I could see some grains.
I never wanted to try it but I felt sorry for her so I tried it.
I can't describe the flavor but one thing I'm sure about is that I didn't like it for sure.
But she told me to eat them all, so I had no choice.
It was retching.
Although I also have a good memory of the food that my aunt made.
Actually, she is a really good cook.
She just makes mistakes sometimes.
Rice with Fish Roe she made was absolutely great.
Fish roes pop in my mouth and slightly salty.

I can not forget those two dishes that I tried.

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Hello Claire!
Thanks for doing so many compositions today. Your effort was incredible. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

When I was 6 years old, my aunt always came to my house to take care of me because my parents went to work every day.
>>CORRECT!
She always made side dishes for all 3meals, send me to kindergarten every morning, and did almost every house chore.
>>She always made side dishes for all 3 meals, sent me to kindergarten every morning, and did almost every house chore.
One day, she gave me an unknown snack that she made.
>>CORRECT!
It smelled like an artificial banana, the color was brown, steaming, and I could see some grains.
>>CORRECT!
I never wanted to try it but I felt sorry for her so I tried it.
>>CORRECT!
I can't describe the flavor but one thing I'm sure about is that I didn't like it for sure.
>>I can't describe the flavor but one thing I'm sure about is that I didn't like it. 
But she told me to eat them all, so I had no choice.
>>CORRECT!
It was retching.
>>It made me want to retch. 
Although I also have a good memory of the food that my aunt made.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, she is a really good cook.
>>CORRECT!
She just makes mistakes sometimes.
>>CORRECT!
Rice with Fish Roe she made was absolutely great.
>>The rice with Fish Roe she made was absolutely great.
Fish roes pop in my mouth and slightly salty.
>>Fish roes pop in my mouth and are slightly salty.
I can not forget those two dishes that I tried.
>>CORRECT!
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