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HOMEWORK:
Is getting angry an effective way of dealing with problems?

For sure getting angry is an effective way of dealing with problems.
But in a negative way of dealing with problems.

Being angry will affect us negatively when we deal with problems.
It will cause stress, and make the hardships harder.
Being angry is not a good way of dealing with problems.
We'll be stressed out easily instead of solving problems.

Then how to deal with problems properly?
First, we need to find the reason that causes this problem.
Second, find the most wise way out to deal with problems.
Third, carry out the way out we have thought into action.
The problem will solve easily if we think slowly and wisely.

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Hello Claire!
Thanks for doing so many compositions today. Your effort was incredible. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

For sure getting angry is an effective way of dealing with problems.
>>CORRECT!
But in a negative way of dealing with problems.
>>But it is a negative way of dealing with problems.
Being angry will affect us negatively when we deal with problems.
>>CORRECT!
It will cause stress, and make the hardships harder.
>>It will cause stress, and make the problems harder.
Being angry is not a good way of dealing with problems.
>>CORRECT!
We'll be stressed out easily instead of solving problems.
>>CORRECT!
Then how to deal with problems properly?
>>CORRECT!
First, we need to find the reason that causes this problem.
>>CORRECT!
Second, find the most wise way out to deal with problems.
>>Second, find the wisest way out to deal with problems.
Third, carry out the way out we have thought into action.
>>third, carry out the solution we have come up with. 
The problem will solve easily if we think slowly and wisely.
>>The problem will be solved easily if we think slowly and wisely.
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