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Who is your idol and why?

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I respected person is King Sejong.
Beacause King Sejong invented Hangeul.

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Hi Emma! ^^

The main reason why we believe in idols is the fact that they can do something we consider huge and amazing. An idol is simply a person who is capable of doing something you'd really like to but always failed to achieve. In such circumstances, our heroes' victories become our own

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I respected person is King Sejong.
>> The person that I respect is King Sejong because he invented "Hangeul". 

Beacause King Sejong invented Hangeul.
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