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How can CCTV\'s help reduce the incidence of crime?

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CCTVs can make the feeling that criminals are being watched by others. There might be few people who commit crimes even though they¡¯re looking by people. CCTVs can be witnesses and in fact, the rate of crime has been decreased.
Another advantage of CCVT is providing crucial evidence to catch criminals. The crime scene can help police inferring and specifying the suspect. By using this information, many criminals were caught.
Because CCTVs watching the crime scenes and can be witness, it can help reduce the incidence of crime.

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CCTVs can make the feeling that criminals are being watched by others. 
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There might be few people who commit crimes even though they¡¯re looking by people. 
>>>  There might be few people who commit crimes even though they¡¯re seen by other people.
>>> OR: There might be few people who commit crimes even though they¡¯re being watched by other people.
CCTVs can be witnesses and in fact, the rate of crime has been decreased.
>>> ORCCTVs can serve as witnesses and in fact, the rate of crime has been decreased. 
Another advantage of CCVT is providing crucial evidence to catch criminals. 
>>> correct 
The crime scene can help police inferring and specifying the suspect. 
>>> The crime scene can help police identify and specify the suspect.  
By using this information, many criminals were caught.
>>> correct 
Because CCTVs watching the crime scenes and can be witness, it can help reduce the incidence of crime.
>>> Because CCTVs are watching the crime scenes and can be witnesses, it can help reduce the incidence of crime. 
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