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Looking around my friends and people at the vicinity of 30's and 40's, SUV is popular and selling most. If they are couples with children, There cannot be better choice but SUV. SUV has many benefits. It is very spacious which is good for parents to change their baby's diapers in the car. As the quality of life improves, people tend to cherish and pursue their leisures, hobbies and self-satisfaction more than earning money and achieving their careers. SUV got nicknamed as family car which means SUV is so convenient for family to ride than Sedan. I suppose the trend help us understand what SUV is selling well.

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Hi there again Inni!

As for sports to be a description for the vehicle, the SUV is expected to perform very efficiently as an athlete on the road and serve the riders well. It can be occupied by more people, contain more luggage than a sedan, among others. However, parking is a challenge to its size.

Hence, choosing an SUV for the family can be more convenient with just a little disadvantage with its size as well.

Thanks for this, great job! See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

Looking around my friends and people at the vicinity of 30's and 40's, SUV is popular and selling most. 
>> Correct!
Or: Looking around my friends and people at the vicinity of 30's and 40's, SUV is popular and selling the most. 

If they are couples with children, There cannot be better choice but SUV. 
>> If they are couples with children, there cannot be a better choice but an SUV. 

SUV has many benefits. 
>> Correct!

It is very spacious which is good for parents to change their baby's diapers in the car. 
>> Correct!

As the quality of life improves, people tend to cherish and pursue their leisures, hobbies and self-satisfaction more than earning money and achieving their careers. 
>> Correct!

SUV got nicknamed as family car which means SUV is so convenient for family to ride than Sedan. 
>> SUV got nicknamed as a family car which means that SUV is so convenient for the family to ride than Sedan. 

I suppose the trend help us understand what SUV is selling well.
>> I suppose the trend helps us understand why the SUV is selling well.
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