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It is observed in many countries that less and less people nowadays go to the cinema to watch movies

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This generation has been lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age, in Corona stage.
So many people watch the cinema at home comfortably from NEFLIX and any other digital contents.
Young people like sharing their hobby through the internet. Finally movie theater is going to decline to show the movies ,
need to change useful purpose.

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Hello Ms. Young Soon. Well, thank you for taking the time to write your thoughts about this issue. Have a nice restful sleep ahead. ^)^
T. Irene
This generation has been lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age, in Corona stage.
>>> This generation has  lived in the age of globalization and lead the information age to the Corona stage.
So many people watch the cinema at home comfortably from NEFLIX and any other digital contents.
>>> So many people watch movies at home comfortably from NETFLIX and any other digital tools
Young people like sharing their hobby through the internet. 
>>> Correct. 
Finally movie theater is going to decline to show the movies, need to change useful purpose.
>>> In the end, movie theaters will lose their popularity and may need to find other useful purposes. 
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