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Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change?

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Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change?

As people get older, they have a fear of new things.
They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one.
They are used to the old one and comfortable.

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Hi Monica! ^^

To be honest, It isn¡¯t hard for old people to change, if they want to. Many of them don¡¯t want to because they like the routine that they have found for themselves after a lifetime of trial and error.

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As people get older, they have a fear of new things.
>> As people get order, they fear new things. 

They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one.
>> They have to adapt to the changes and it is hard to learn them as well. 

They are used to the old one and comfortable.
>>They are used to their old doing and they feel comfortable with that. 
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