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Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change?

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Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change?

As people get older, they have a fear of new things.
They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one.
They are used to the old one and comfortable.

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Hi Monica! ^^

To be honest, It isn¡¯t hard for old people to change, if they want to. Many of them don¡¯t want to because they like the routine that they have found for themselves after a lifetime of trial and error.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

As people get older, they have a fear of new things.
>> As people get order, they fear new things. 

They have to adapt the change and it is hard to learn new one.
>> They have to adapt to the changes and it is hard to learn them as well. 

They are used to the old one and comfortable.
>>They are used to their old doing and they feel comfortable with that. 
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