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How do you maintain your good mind and body condition?

I maintain my good mind from my good condition. I try to read self improvement books that is helpful for my positive mindset.
I do exercise twice a week. I usually go to a park and walk along the river side.
It makes me relaxed. That time gives me to organized my thoughts.
So I could maintain my good mind and body condition.

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Hi Ellie,
People with good physical and mental health have higher energy levels, so they can achieve more. They can also enjoy better sleep and clearer minds that help them make vital decisions or to relax. Keep an active mind and healthy body condition.  ~ Teacher Quenny
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How do you maintain your good mind and body condition?
>>How do you maintain your good mind and body condition?(Correct)
I maintain my good mind from my good condition. I try to read self improvement books that is helpful for my positive mindset.
>>I maintain my good mind to have a good condition. I try to read self-improvement books that are helpful for my positive mindset.
I do exercise twice a week. I usually go to a park and walk along the river side.
>>I do exercise twice a week. I usually go to a park and walk along the riverside.
It makes me relaxed. That time gives me to organized my thoughts.
>> It makes me relaxed and during that time it gives me a mentality or outlook to organize my thoughts.
So I could maintain my good mind and body condition.
>> So, I could maintain my good mind and body condition.
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How do you maintain your good mind and body condition?

I maintain my good mind from my good condition. I try to read self improvement books that is helpful for my positive mindset.
I do exercise twice a week. I usually go to a park and walk along the river side.
It makes me relaxed. That time gives me to organized my thoughts.
So I could maintain my good mind and body condition.
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