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Q:What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of cell phones?
A:Advantages of cell phone is we can call to our friend, or other people faster than before.
Also, we can say somethings with message, and we don't need to talk if we use message.
But if we use cell phones, we don't need to meet to talk and we don't need to write letters.
And if we use cell phones for long time, it hurts our eyes so if someone look at cell phone for long time, then he need to wear glasses.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Advantages of cell phone is we can call to our friend, or other people faster than before.

>> An advantage of cell phones is we can call our friends or other people faster than before.
Also, we can say somethings with message, and we don't need to talk if we use message.

>> We can also say something through texts, we don't need to talk if we send a message.
But if we use cell phones, we don't need to meet to talk and we don't need to write letters.

>> If we use cell phones, we don't need to meet to talk and we don't need to write letters.
And if we use cell phones for long time, it hurts our eyes so if someone look at cell phone for long time, then he need to wear glasses.

>> But if we use cell phones for a long time, it hurts our eyes, so if someone looks at a cell phone for a long time, then he needs to wear glasses.

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