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What is the worst problem you have ever faced in your life and how did you handle it?

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The worst problem I had ever in my life was having academy level test.
In my town, there is a big English academy, and if we go there, we have level test first.
And if we are done about having level test, we are assigned the level so we can have class.
And I was a student of the academy, so I had the academy's level test.
Actually I don't mind about tests, but my friends said the level test is very difficult so I think I was little afraid of it.
But it was not that difficult so I could get good grade about it.

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Hi John! ^^

Fear is a natural feeling. At least, at the end of it, you still had a good grade. Congratulations :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

The worst problem I had ever in my life was having academy level test.
>> The worst problem I had ever in my life was having an academy level test.

In my town, there is a big English academy, and if we go there, we have level test first.
>>In my town, there is a big English academy, and if we go there, we need to have a level test first.

And if we are done about having level test, we are assigned the level so we can have class.
>> Once we are done, we are going to be assigned a certain level for our class. 

And I was a student of the academy, so I had the academy's level test.
>> So I had the level test to be a student of the academy. 

Actually I don't mind about tests, but my friends said the level test is very difficult so I think I was little afraid of it.
>> Actually, I don't mind the test but my friends said that it was very difficult so I got a little afraid. 

But it was not that difficult so I could get good grade about it.
>> Even though I thought it was difficult, I still  got a good  grade from it. 
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