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Fire and firefighter

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There is such a saying in my country, "Let's see the extinguished fire again".
I think it means emphasizing care and attention about fires.
Therefore, we must be careful with everything to prevent fires.
Firefighter is one of the dangerous professions,
Without responsibility, they may find it difficult to do the job.
So, being a firefighter is an interesting, but never an easy job.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I truly like the flow of your sentences here.
You really did a good job. 
The last sentence, especially caught my attention.
This is proof of your improvement.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There is such a saying in my country, "Let's see the extinguished fire again".
>> Correct
I think it means emphasizing care and attention about fires.
>> I think it means emphasizing care and attention to fire.
Therefore, we must be careful with everything to prevent fires.
>> Correct
Firefighter is one of the dangerous professions,
>> Being a firefighter is one of the dangerous professions.
Without responsibility, they may find it difficult to do the job.
>> Without a sense of responsibility, they may find it difficult to do the job.
So, being a firefighter is an interesting, but never an easy job.
>> Correct
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