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HOMEWORK:
Do you use your real name on the Internet? Why or why not?

I don't use my real name on the internet.
We learned that using real names on the internet is clearly not a good idea.
The real name is part of our personal information.
Using our real name on the internet is just as same as spreading our personal information to society.
These days technology has been developed.
Thus if we connect to the internet or post our pictures or something everyone can see what we have done on the internet in a second.
In my opinion, it is definitely not a good idea to show our real name to everyone on Earth.
There can be a lot of people with the same name in the world but we can know many things through the name.
Such as if it is SNS(tik tok, Instagram..)people might know our face and name.
Therefore they can know how do we look like or even further, where we live.
So I do not agree with using our real names on the internet.

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Hello Claire!
This was almost perfect! Great job! See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I don't use my real name on the internet.
>>CORRECT!
We learned that using real names on the internet is clearly not a good idea.
>>CORRECT!
The real name is part of our personal information.
>>Our real name is part of our personal information.
Using our real name on the internet is just as same as spreading our personal information to society.
>>Using our real name on the internet is just the same as spreading our personal information in public.
These days technology has been developed.
>>CORRECT!
Thus if we connect to the internet or post our pictures or something everyone can see what we have done on the internet in a second.
>>CORRECT!
In my opinion, it is definitely not a good idea to show our real name to everyone on Earth.
>>CORRECT!
There can be a lot of people with the same name in the world but we can know many things through the name.
>>CORRECT!
Such as if it is SNS(tik tok, Instagram..)people might know our face and name.
>>Such as if it is on SNS(tik tok, Instagram..) people might know our real face and name.
Therefore they can know how do we look like or even further, where we live.
>>Therefore, they can know how we look like or even worse, where we live.
So I do not agree with using our real names on the internet.
>>CORRECT!
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