¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

It\'s my life

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¶û
2021-07-19 186

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®



My parents can give me advice or advice about my dream or this job, but "I wish I could do this job". I don't think it's forcing. Among the things that I am good at and I like, most of my parents recommend that I be good at what I am good at, but I think I should make what I love as a profession. If you do what you love, your future work will not only be fun, but it will also have the potential to develop further. I gave up on becoming a diplomat because of my lack of skills, but in fact, a police officer also needs to study very well to get in. Seoul National University and the National Police University, the top universities in Korea, can be seen as standing shoulder to shoulder. Also, National Police University focuses on Korean, English, and social studies. These words from Alice helped me a lot before I found a job as a police officer, when I had just given up on my dream of being a diplomat. ¡°Not knowing where you want to go means you can choose any path.¡±

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Maria!

Choosing where you want to go and being great at it makes you learn so many things. Perhaps, if you choose other paths, you may also be happy and successful. However, you will never know that anymore. Choosing something and doing your best about it makes you feel joyful as there is contentment in this path.

So in whatever you choose, do your best and always be happy about it. 

Thanks for choosing to do this composition. I am happy to read and suggest some things to make it better all the time!

-T. Donna  =)

My parents can give me advice or advice about my dream or this job, but "I wish I could do this job". 
>> Correct!

I don't think it's forcing. 
>> Correct!

Among the things that I am good at and I like, most of my parents recommend that I be good at what I am good at, but I think I should make what I love as a profession. 
>> Among the things that I am good at and I like most of my parents recommend is that I can be good at what I am good at but I think I should do what I love as a profession. 

If you do what you love, your future work will not only be fun, but it will also have the potential to develop further. 
>> Correct!

I gave up on becoming a diplomat because of my lack of skills, but in fact, a police officer also needs to study very well to get in. 
>> Correct!

Seoul National University and the National Police University, the top universities in Korea, can be seen as standing shoulder to shoulder. 
>> Correct!

Also, National Police University focuses on Korean, English, and social studies. 
>> Also, the National Police University focuses on Korean, English, and social studies.  

These words from Alice helped me a lot before I found a job as a police officer, when I had just given up on my dream of being a diplomat. 
>> Correct!

¡°Not knowing where you want to go means you can choose any path.¡±
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
110265 How to sleep comfortably through tropical nights À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-24 2
110264 China denies power outages in provinces À¯*Áø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-24 1
110263 How do you treat a cold? ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 1
110262 Page 49 ¿À*Àº ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 240
110261 Cut down from my life. ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110260 What has changed in your life since last year? ÇÏ*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 182
110259 Homework ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 254
110258 homework Àü*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 172
110257 Homework ¹Ú*¹ü ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 195
110256 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 210
110255 Filling in the blanks ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 206
110254 Making sentence>0 ±è*¶û ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 210
110253 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110252 How do you treat a cold? ³ë*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 1
110251 What has changed in your life since last year? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 271
110250 Why do you think is it harder for old people to accept change? ÃÖ*¿Á ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110249 What do you think is the reason why the number of COVID-19 cases... ÃÖ*¿Á ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110248 Has technology made our lives easier or more complicated?... ÃÖ*¿Á ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110247 How can you describe your family in your own words? ÃÖ*¿Á ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 0
110246 homework ¹é*Çö ¿Ï·á 2021-07-23 213

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04