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If you had the power to go back to the past and the future, which one do you want to see?

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I believe that it is impossible to go back to the past, but if the chance have given to me I'd like to go back in my twenties. I mean at that time, I was so an honest and ordinary person. Most people thought I am a model student. I want to tell me in those days to live free and do that I want to and life is not serious that you think.

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Hi there Jane!

Wanting to go to the past or present is a good wishful thinking that will never really happen. However, in case someday, scientists can bend time as proposed by many of them, we might have the chance to see our younger or older self. It is interesting that you want to see your past self and give an advice as well. Perhaps when we tweak somethin in the past, there is a twist in the future. We will never know.

Thanks for this answer. I appreciate the time you devote to share your ideas to the questions asked on your homework.

See you on Wednesday!

-T. Donna =)

I believe that it is impossible to go back to the past, but if the chance have given to me I'd like to go back in my twenties. 
>> I believe that it is impossible to go back to the past, but if the chance will be given to me, I'd like to go back in my twenties. 

I mean at that time, I was so an honest and ordinary person. 
>> Correct!

Most people thought I am a model student. 
>> Correct!

I want to tell me in those days to live free and do that I want to and life is not serious that you think.
>> I want to tell myself in those days to live freely and do that I want as life is not serious than I think.
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