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HOMEWORK:
Do you believe in ghosts? Why or why not?

I don't believe ghosts.
In the world, lots of things that can't be explained by science are happening.
Although usually, those happenings have no evidence nor other things that can support the reality.
Therefore we can think that those happenings are usually fake, tricks, or be manipulated.
Then why do you think many people are still believing ghosts and spirits?
Because spirits, ghosts, or other those kinds of things are related to religions.
In my subjective opinion, the belief in ghosts or spirits is a personal choice.
Some people believe no ghosts exist, but some others believe them.
The existence of ghosts depends on our choices.

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Hello Claire!
Thanks for your efforts today ^^
~~Teacher Kate

I don't believe ghosts.
>>I don't believe in ghosts.
In the world, lots of things that can't be explained by science are happening.
>>CORRECT!
Although usually, those happenings have no evidence nor other things that can support the reality.
>>Although usually, those happenings have no evidence and can't be supported by science.
Therefore we can think that those happenings are usually fake, tricks, or be manipulated.
>>Therefore we can think that those happenings are usually fake, tricks, or are manipulated.
Then why do you think many people are still believing ghosts and spirits?
>>Then why do you think many people still believe in ghosts and spirits?
Because spirits, ghosts, or other those kinds of things are related to religions.
>>CORRECT!
In my subjective opinion, the belief in ghosts or spirits is a personal choice.
>>CORRECT!
Some people believe no ghosts exist, but some others believe them.
>>CORRECT!
The existence of ghosts depends on our choices.
>>CORRECT!
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