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7/19 homework

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2021-07-20 273

회원님의 영작문

I worked at Kyoto University in Japan for two years.
I was a postdoctoral fellow there, we call the position a pos-doc.
My major is chemical engineering, but, I worked in the department of earth and planetary science.
My research topic is plasma processing and application.
I studied only in the engineering field before I went to Japan, Kyoto University wants to use plasma for the scientific field.
So, they need an expert for plasma application.
At that time, I thought the advantages and disadvantages both.
It was a chance to expand my research range.
On the other hand, my research carrier in the engineering field loses two years.
Finally, I choose a challenge.
I was at Inha University for ten years, so I already felt boring.
It was a moment to need new things.
The conclusion is satisfactory.
My research range expanded and I back to the engineering field.
Moreover, the research in Kyoto applying to engineering applications.
And now, I'm not afraid to new challange.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Nicole! Wow, I can really say that you are an expert in your craft. It's fun to read this kind of composition where you have the ability to sequence each event in your life. There are a few grammar mistakes, please check them out. Overall, I understood everything you said here. Keep it up!

- Teacher Ivy :)

I worked at Kyoto University in Japan for two years.

>>I worked in Japan for two years at Kyoto University.
 I was a postdoctoral fellow there, we call the position a pos-doc.

>> I was a post doctoral fellow there, we call it post-doc.
 My major is chemical engineering, but, I worked in the department of earth and planetary science.

>>My major is chemical engineering, but I worked in the department of earth and planetary science.
 My research topic is plasma processing and application.

>>My research topic is about plasma processing and application.
 I studied only in the engineering field before I went to Japan, Kyoto University wants to use plasma for the scientific field.

>> Before I went to Japan, I only studied in the engineering field. Kyoto University wanted to use plasma in the scientific field.
 So, they need an expert for plasma application.

>> They needed an expert in plasma application.
 At that time, I thought the advantages and disadvantages both.

>> I thought of both the advantages and disadvantages.
 It was a chance to expand my research range.

>> It was a chance for me to expand my research range.
 On the other hand, my research carrier in the engineering field loses two years.

>> On the other hand, my research carrier in the engineering field lost two years.
 Finally, I choose a challenge.

>> I decided to choose the challenge.
 I was at Inha University for ten years, so I already felt boring.

>> I was working at Inha University for ten years, it already felt boring.
 It was a moment to need new things.

>> At that moment, I knew I needed to try new things.
 The conclusion is satisfactory.

>> I’m satisfied with my decision.
 My research range expanded and I back to the engineering field.

>> My research range expanded and I am back in the engineering field.
 Moreover, the research in Kyoto applying to engineering applications.

>> Moreover, the research in Kyoto can be applied in engineering.
 And now, I'm not afraid to new challange. 

>> I am no longer afraid to face a new challenge.

 


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