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My parents never force me to \"do this, you have to do this\".

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If I can't find what I want to do, I tell my mom, "I don't know what I want to do." Then my mom encourages to take her job aptitude test. Or she recommends to me, "Why don't you try something like this? I think this job suits your personality." My parents never force me to "do this, you have to do this". My parents said that since I was a child, I was always confident in my own opinions. So I am confident that my future will be bright, but when change from diplomat to police, I think they say "Why are you saying you're going to become a police officer that everyone else does, or just be a diplomat?" or the other friends have already made up their minds and moved forward, but there have been times when I thought it would be too late to change now. Still, I like the police. It was wonderful to run, day or night, to protect others, and above all, I couldn't help but fall in love with the spirit of the police: "When citizens are in danger, the police are the first to react".

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Hello Maria!

I was surprised as well to know that from being a diplomat, you are shifting your career to being a police woman. Well, I think that being a police is staying on duty all of your life. When people need you, regardless of where you are, you have to be vigilant and serve. If you want this kind of career, I support you 101 % because I know that in whatever career you choose, you will shine brightly and perform to the best of your ability.

So, a snappy salute to you and your dream!

-T. Donna =)

If I can't find what I want to do, I tell my mom, "I don't know what I want to do." 
>> Correct!

Then my mom encourages to take her job aptitude test. 
>> Then my mom encourages  me to take the job aptitude test. 

Or she recommends to me, "Why don't you try something like this? I think this job suits your personality." 
>> Correct!

My parents never force me to "do this, you have to do this". 
>> Correct!
Or: My parents never force me to "Do this, you have to do this". 

My parents said that since I was a child, I was always confident in my own opinions. 
>> Correct!

So I am confident that my future will be bright, but when change from diplomat to police, I think they say "Why are you saying you're going to become a police officer that everyone else does, or just be a diplomat?" or the other friends have already made up their minds and moved forward, but there have been times when I thought it would be too late to change now. 
>> So I am confident that my future will be bright, but when I changed from diplomat to police, I think they said, "Why are you saying that you're going to become a police officer that's what everyone else does, just be a diplomat." Or the other friends have already made up their minds and moved forward, but there have been times when I thought it would be too late to change now. 

Still, I like the police. It was wonderful to run, day or night, to protect others, and above all, I couldn't help but fall in love with the spirit of the police: "When citizens are in danger, the police are the first to react".
>> Still, I like to be a police. It is wonderful to run, day or night to protect others, and above all, I couldn't help but fall in love with the spirit of the police: "When citizens are in danger, the police are the first to react".
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