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Of all the many apps, I think the Internet is by far the best. With the advent of the Internet, the task of collecting information and writing a thesis based on that information spread throughout elementary, middle, high school, and college. And thanks to the Internet, that task has been made a little easier. Besides this, you can also find photos and videos of your favorite idols and anime. YouTube is the most popular app besides the internet. There is a lot of helpful information on YouTube as well, but unlike the Internet, there are a lot of elements that are a little more interesting. For example, game YouTubers give people surprise and laughter by playing games, and in the case of cooking, they learn to cook the dishes they want to make. In this way, mobile phones install many apps, communicate with people, get information, and are sometimes used as a stress reliever.

P.S. That photo is so funny! Isn't it?LOL

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Hello Maria!

Amongst all the things that the phone possesses, without the Internet, we cannot access all the information we need. Also, we cannot have our Skype class together! The Internet has changed our lives forever. Use it wisely and efficiently always.

Thank you for this answer. See you for more of our lesson in class!

-T. Donna =)

Of all the many apps, I think the Internet is by far the best. 
>> Correct!

With the advent of the Internet, the task of collecting information and writing a thesis based on that information spread throughout elementary, middle, high school, and college. 
>> Correct!

And thanks to the Internet, that task has been made a little easier. 
>> Correct!

Besides this, you can also find photos and videos of your favorite idols and anime. 
>> Correct!

YouTube is the most popular app besides the internet. 
>> Correct!

There is a lot of helpful information on YouTube as well, but unlike the Internet, there are a lot of elements that are a little more interesting. 
>> Correct!

For example, game YouTubers give people surprise and laughter by playing games, and in the case of cooking, they learn to cook the dishes they want to make. 
>> Correct!

In this way, mobile phones install many apps, communicate with people, get information, and are sometimes used as a stress reliever.
>> Correct!

P.S. That photo is so funny! Isn't it?LOL
>> Correct!
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