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I have a mother who is 'so generous.' She has a 'warm' personality. I have 'money' for her. The people in our community have 'some plans' for my mother. (Actually I don't know what to put.. :0 )

2.

I have a 'E-book reader'. It is so important to me. I got it when 'I was depressed.' I will always 'carry it on a long trip' no matter what.
People often tell me I am lucky for 'having' it.

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Hello Yu Jeong,

Remember that learning English requires action. One small action is more powerful than reading hundreds of articles. Yes, we know it is very hard to do things, even if they are good for us. 

I commend you for being so active and alert to listen and speak the language; continue that attitude because you can achieve many things in learning English.

Don't pull yourself down!!!!

T. Jeny


1. would have never found out
>>correct
2. would never have done
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3. had known
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4. had stopped
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5. wouldn't have guessed
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6. would have gone
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7. had returned
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8. hadn't been
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9. hadn't called
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10. had given
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1. I have a mother who is 'so generous.' 
>>correct
She has a 'warm' personality. I have 'money' for her. 
>>correct
The people in our community have 'some plans' for my mother. 
>>correct
(Actually I don't know what to put.. :0 )
>>correct
2. I have a 'E-book reader'.
>>I have an 'E-book reader'.
 It is so important to me.
>>correct
 I got it when 'I was depressed.'
>>correct
 I will always 'carry it on a long trip' no matter what.
>>correct
People often tell me I am lucky for 'having' it.
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