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What kind of games or toys did you play when you were young? Do you think games or toys in the past

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When I was young I used to play a traditional and sports games with group.
At that time we enjoyed the games with soul friends in the yard.
Nowadays young people who lead information age are very busy for their studies ,works and homework.
So they are hard to share the free time. And they stay home alone ,enjoy the computer games , kind of joys only on line .
They are familiar with IT(information technology) ,have to follow the time.
I think they need to make up for the deficiencies such as playing sports with people on the ground .

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Good evening Ms. Young Soon. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
When I was young, I used to play a traditional and sports games with group.
>>> When I was young, I used to play a traditional  group sport or game.
At that time we enjoyed the games with soul friends in the yard.
>>> At that time, we enjoyed playing the games with very close friends in the yard.
Nowadays young people who lead information age are very busy for their studies ,works and homework.
>> Nowadays, young people who belong to this information age are very busy with their studies or works.
So they are hard to share the free time. And they stay home alone ,enjoy the computer games , kind of joys only on line .
>>> They hardly have free time and if they do, they just stay home, play computer games or do anything online. 
They are familiar with IT(information technology) ,have to follow the time.
>>> They are too involved in the information technology. 
I think they need to make up for the deficiencies such as playing sports with people on the ground .
>>> I think they need to make up for their deficiencies in active sports. 
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