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As you know, a lot of our daily lives have changed due to Corona since last year. The biggest change in my life is college class. All classes in my school became non-face-to-face and I only took the exam at school. I can't meet my friends through online classes and I can't feel that I am a college student because I don't go to school well.

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Hi Yeong! ^^

That's true! :( Our lives are greatly affected because of the pandemic. But regardless of so, we should still be thankful of all the good things that we have despite these changes. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

As you know, a lot of our daily lives have changed due to Corona since last year. 
>> As you know, our daily lives have change dur to Covid-19 since last year. 

The biggest change in my life is college class. 
>> The biggest change in my life is the way we have classes in college. 

All classes in my school became non-face-to-face and I only took the exam at school. 
>> All my classes now are done online and exams are to be took at school. 

I can't meet my friends through online classes and I can't feel that I am a college student because I don't go to school well.
>>I can't meet my friends through online classes and I can't feel that I am a college student because I don't go to school that much. 

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