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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Filling in the blanks

작성자: 최*정
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회원님의 영작문

Would you like to share a taxi to the train station?
It'a best not to exchange money at the bus station. Their rates are really low.
I think we are lost. I am going to ask for directions.
We can order a vegetarian meal online.
It's been a while since anna has gone on vacation.
I'll have to see if I can get time off work.
Sally brought toothpaste. But she forgot her toothbrush.
I've already checked us in online for our flight. But we still have to drop off our bags when we get to the airport.
Are you bringing your suitcase or backpack?
What's the weather like in may? Is it warm there?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Yujeoeong,
You can construct sentences using basic structures, although lapses in grammar (e.g. lack of prepositions) are still noted. However, please be careful with your sentences next time. Review the grammar rules for guidance.  And pay attention to how words are used and sentences are structured. ~ Teacher Quenny

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Filling in the blanks
>> Filling in the blanks(Correct)
Would you like to share a taxi to the train station?
>>Would you like to share a taxi to the train station?(Correct)
It'a best not to exchange money at the bus station. Their rates are really low.
>> It's best not to exchange money at the bus station. Their rates are really low.
I think we are lost. I am going to ask for directions.
>>I think we are lost. I am going to ask for directions.(Correct)
We can order a vegetarian meal online.
>> We can order a vegetarian meal online.(Correct)
It's been a while since anna has gone on vacation.
>> It's been a while since Anna has gone on a vacation.
I'll have to see if I can get time off work.
>> I'll have to see if I can get a day off work.
Sally brought toothpaste. But she forgot her toothbrush.
>> Sally brought toothpaste but she forgot her toothbrush.
I've already checked us in online for our flight. But we still have to drop off our bags when we get to the airport.
>> I've already checked in online for our flight. But we still have to drop off our bags when we get to the airport.
Are you bringing your suitcase or backpack?
>>Are you bringing your suitcase or backpack?(Correct)
What's the weather like in may? Is it warm there?
>> What's the weather like in May? Is it warm there? 
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Filling in the blanks

Would you like to share a taxi to the train station?
It'a best not to exchange money at the bus station. Their rates are really low.
I think we are lost. I am going to ask for directions.
We can order a vegetarian meal online.
It's been a while since anna has gone on vacation.
I'll have to see if I can get time off work.
Sally brought toothpaste. But she forgot her toothbrush.
I've already checked us in online for our flight. But we still have to drop off our bags when we get to the airport.
Are you bringing your suitcase or backpack?
What's the weather like in may? Is it warm there?
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