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What were the different ways of keeping in touch in the past? Which way was the best?

In the past, people used to contact each other by letter or postcard or use a pay phone.
I think it's better than a letter because it's possible to communicate quickly with a public phone.

I don't use letters these days, so I feel good when I receive them sometimes

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Hi, Kylie!
Thank you for sharing.  The old ways are sometimes more sincere than the modern ways. ^^
~Elica~
What were the different ways of keeping in touch in the past? Which way was the best?
>>CORRECT

In the past, people used to contact each other by letter or postcard or use a pay phone.
>>In the past, people used to contact each other by writing letters, making postcards or using pay phones
I think it's better than a letter because it's possible to communicate quickly with a public phone.
>>I think it's better than a letter because it's possible to communicate quickly with a public phone. 

I don't use letters these days, so I feel good when I receive them sometimes
>>CORRECT
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