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HOMEWORK:
Complete the following sentences using though or but.

1. (Though) she tried her best she could get the first rank.
2. He is very old (but) he enjoys good health.
3. The police tried their best (but) they could not catch the criminal.
4. (Though ). he ran fast, he could not win the race.
5. (Though) the doctor treated her well, he could not save her.
6. She had the required qualifications (but ) she did not get the job.
7. (Though) I had some money I didn¡¯t buy anything.
8. He was ill (but) he attended the meeting.
9. (Though) our team played well, they lost the match.
10. (Though) the lawyer argued well, he lost the case.

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I hope that you can find time to check and review my corrections so that you'll be knowledgeable on how to use this words. Have a great time in learning in English and motivate yourself.

Have a nice day!!!

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HOMEWORK:
Complete the following sentences using though or but.

1. (Though) she tried her best she could get the first rank.
>>correct
2. He is very old (but) he enjoys good health.
>>correct
3. The police tried their best (but) they could not catch the criminal.
>>correct
4. (Though ). he ran fast, he could not win the race.
>>correct
5. (Though) the doctor treated her well, he could not save her.
>>correct
6. She had the required qualifications (but ) she did not get the job.
>>correct
7. (Though) I had some money I didn¡¯t buy anything.
>>correct
8. He was ill (but) he attended the meeting.
>>correct
9. (Though) our team played well, they lost the match.
>>correct
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