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What is your favorite celebration?

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Well, when it comes to celebration, I choose Christmas. In fact, X-mas is not only Jesus's birthday but also my son's one.
When I was young, on every X-mas I went to the church and worshiped Jesus and it was really meaningful. Since then, it has remained the same. Apart from that, my son was born on Christmas day and I delivered birth him naturally so it is also special for me.
For me as well as my family, Christmas is very a meaningful day and I enjoy it completely.

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Hi Jane! Welcome to a new week!

Your family is truly blessed to have your son born on Christmas day. You can be reminded how precious life is and celebrate it the day Christ was born. For Christians, this is very remarkable and worth praising for.

Thanks for drafting this answer. I'm sure you are busy but you found time to send it. I really appreciate it.

See you later in class, Jane!

-T. Donna =) 

Well, when it comes to celebration, I choose Christmas. 
>> Correct!

In fact, X-mas is not only Jesus's birthday but also my son's one.
>> In fact, X-mas is not only Jesus's birthday but also my son's.

When I was young, on every X-mas I went to the church and worshiped Jesus and it was really meaningful. 
>> When I was young, every X-mas, I went to the church and worshiped Jesus and it was really meaningful. 

Since then, it has remained the same. 
>> Correct!

Apart from that, my son was born on Christmas day and I delivered birth him naturally so it is also special for me.
>> Apart from that, my son was born on Christmas day and I delivered him naturally so it is also special for me.

For me as well as my family, Christmas is very a meaningful day and I enjoy it completely.
>> Correct!
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