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Which one do you think is better, working in Korea or working in a different country?

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I think both things are good, but working in a different country is better. Because, If I work in foreign company, I can experience new things that I can't experience in Korea. Moreover, I can be surrounded various foreign languages. Therefore, I can learn languages more easily and quickly.

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Hi Yun! ^^

There are many reasons why working abroad will benefit both yourself personally, and your career. Two of the most obvious (yet still important) are: Better career opportunities and prospects: Depending on your skill set, there may be a greater range of career opportunities open to you outside your home market.

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I think both things are good, but working in a different country is better. 
>> CORRECT

Because, If I work in foreign company, I can experience new things that I can't experience in Korea. 
>> If we work in a foreign company, I can experience new things that I can't experience in Korea. 

Moreover, I can be surrounded various foreign languages. 
>> CORRECT

Therefore, I can learn languages more easily and quickly.
>> CORRECT
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