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What is one difference between education in Korea and education abroad?

작성자: 이*현
2021-07-27 246

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In Korea education, teacher is host and students even listen his or her class.
They study alone going blind and they have to sit for about five ~ ten hours a day if they want to good scored.
It is the word. "Learning by rote"
Many Korean think the way is bad education structure, even if they are good at study.
Many high school students don't have their dream.
Their object is only 'to entry good university'.
Many of the students which don't have dream don't still know what they really want about their job when they become adult. It's applicable to me.
There are many advanced education countries.
One of the way is that students directly participate their class, discuss the topic of the class, and solve the problem together.
Other country's students can experience many jobs before they entry a university, so they can choose the major that they have interest.
Honestly, I'm more comfortable to just listen and solve alone, but I think It must be changed like other advanced countries,

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang,

I am happy to read your answer for this query.  Practice so you could gain more confidence in using English. :)


-T. Maine


In Korea education, teacher is host and students even listen his or her class.

>>In Korea, the teacher is the host and the students listen in the class.
 They study alone going blind and they have to sit for about five ~ ten hours a day if they want to good scored.

>>The students study all by themselves and have to sit down for about five to ten hours a day if they want to get a good score.
 It is the word. "Learning by rote"

>>This is what "Learning by rote" means.
 Many Korean think the way is bad education structure, even if they are good at study.

>>Many Koreans think that way is a terrible structure in the education system even if the students are good at studying.
 Many high school students don't have their dream.

>>Many high school students don't have their dreams.
 Their object is only 'to entry good university'.

>>Their objective is only to enter a good university.
 Many of the students which don't have dream don't still know what they really want about their job when they become adult. It's applicable to me.

>>Many students who don't have dreams still don't know what career they will take when they become adults.  I can easily relate to this situation.
 There are many advanced education countries.

>>There are many countries with advanced education system.
 One of the way is that students directly participate their class, discuss the topic of the class, and solve the problem together.

>>Students directly participate in the class through discussions and solving problems together.
 Other country's students can experience many jobs before they entry a university, so they can choose the major that they have interest.

>>Other country's students can experience various jobs before they enter a university, so they can choose the field which they are interested to study.
 Honestly, I'm more comfortable to just listen and solve alone, but I think It must be changed like other advanced countries,

>>Honestly, I'm more comfortable listening and solving problems alone, but I think I must change and adapt how advanced students study abroad.

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