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Once you study hard, you become smarter, so when you grow up to be an adult, you can be recognized socially and in interpersonal relationships. In addition, you can receive various rewards such as scholarships and awards even when you are a student, so you can enjoy your high school or college life easily, quickly, and perfectly. I'm not lagging behind others, and I feel more confident when expressing myself through documents and personal statements. There is an older brother I know, and he is now working with Samsung, the world's best electronics company. He didn't go in by passing the exam himself, but by a scout offer! The only thing I know about him is "my brother who is good at studying," and to some extent, he received a scholarship to enter high school, and during summer and winter vacations, he cleared seven math book. He said he finish one book a week. He studied really well, to the point of being really creepy. I think it's really, really scary, and at the same time great...

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Hi there Maria!

I wish to meet this oppa and tell him how epic he is when it comes to studying. Studying is not easy and when one is so interested in doing it, s/he needs to be rewarded. Just like you, even if online classes can be difficult, you don't stop learning and doing your best because you know that it is what is best for your future.

Always remember that being smart is really cool and knowledge is a great power and responsibility as well. Study hard and see you tomorrow!

-T. Donna =)

Once you study hard, you become smarter, so when you grow up to be an adult, you can be recognized socially and in interpersonal relationships. 
>> Correct!

In addition, you can receive various rewards such as scholarships and awards even when you are a student, so you can enjoy your high school or college life easily, quickly, and perfectly. 
>> Correct!

I'm not lagging behind others, and I feel more confident when expressing myself through documents and personal statements. 
>> Correct!

There is an older brother I know, and he is now working with Samsung, the world's best electronics company. 
>> Correct!

He didn't go in by passing the exam himself, but by a scout offer! 
>> Correct!

The only thing I know about him is "my brother who is good at studying," and to some extent, he received a scholarship to enter high school, and during summer and winter vacations, he cleared seven math book. 
>> Correct!

He said he finish one book a week. He studied really well, to the point of being really creepy. 
>> Correct!

I think it's really, really scary, and at the same time great...
>> Correct!
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