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How do you feel about President Moon Jae-in considering a pardon for jailed ex-President Park Geun-h

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I feel quite different for both. I feel negative about a pardon for Park Geun-hye and positive for Lee Jae-yong.
Park is politician and what she have done could've occured a national disaster. A pardon for her doesn't make any benefit either to a country or citizen.
Lee's case needs to be treated different but it shouldn't be a special treatment. Samsung is not just a company but have an huge influence on a country. They holds an important position politically, economically and diplomatically. Under the current situation, South Korea is struggle to recover its economy and the world focus on dominating in a semi-conduct industry. A pardon for Lee can lead to better situation so that public opinion has a generous attitude relatively.
Whether a pardon will be done or not, it have to be done in consideration of national welfare and emotion. The important thing is it shouldn't be shown like they have a privilege.

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I feel quite different for both. 

>>correct

I feel negative about a pardon for Park Geun-hye and positive for Lee Jae-yong.

>>correct
Park is politician and what she have done could've occured a national disaster.

>>Park is a politician, and what she has done could've occurred a national disaster.

 A pardon for her doesn't make any benefit either to a country or citizen.

>> A pardon for her doesn't make any benefit either to our country or its' citizens.
Lee's case needs to be treated different but it shouldn't be a special treatment. 

>>Lee's case needs to be treated differently, but it shouldn't be a special treatment.

Samsung is not just a company but have an huge influence on a country. 

>>Samsung is not just a company but has a huge influence on our country. 

They holds an important position politically, economically and diplomatically. 

>>He holds an important position politically, economically, and diplomatically. 

Under the current situation, South Korea is struggle to recover its economy and the world focus on dominating in a semi-conduct industry. 

>>Under the current situation, South Korea is struggling to recover its economy, and the world focuses on dominating the semiconductor industry. 

A pardon for Lee can lead to better situation so that public opinion has a generous attitude relatively.

>>A pardon for Lee can lead to a better situation so that public opinion has a generous attitude relatively.
Whether a pardon will be done or not, it have to be done in consideration of national welfare and emotion. 

>>Whether a pardon will be done or not, it has to be done in consideration of the national welfare and emotion. 

The important thing is, it shouldn't be shown like they have a privilege.

>>correct 

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