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What has changed in your life since last year?

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What has changed in your life since last year?

My life has not changed a little since last year.
I am still wearing the mask, I have to be carefule from COVID-19.
If there is no pendemic this year, I will enjoy more activity.
I hope that next year will be dfferent than this year.

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Hi Monica! ^^

Our lives are greatly affected because of the pandemic. But regardless of so, we should still be thankful of all the good things that we have despite these changes. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

My life has not changed a little since last year.
>> CORRECT

I am still wearing the mask, I have to be carefule from COVID-19.
>> I am still wearing a mask and have to be careful against COVID-19. 

If there is no pendemic this year, I will enjoy more activity.
>> If there is no pandemic this year, I will enjoy more activities. 

I hope that next year will be dfferent than this year.
>> I hope next year will be different from this year. 

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