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What are the pros and cons of both husband and wife working?

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Husband and wife working is practically a desirable way to live with family, if they don't have a kid.
Working may serve them sufficient finance and self satisfaction if they want to do.
But if they have a kid ,it is hard to take care of him ,need anyone who bring up the kid.
Modern society require working parents, also supporting for the kid at work.
To work both, they have to share housework and respect each other.

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Good evening ma'am. Thank you for giving your opinion regarding this topics. 
T. Irene
Husband and wife working is practically a desirable way to live with family, if they don't have a kid.
>>> Both husband and wife working is a desirable and practical way for a couple live if they don't have kids. 
Working may serve them sufficient finance and self satisfaction if they want to do.
>>> Working may serve them sufficient finances and self satisfaction.
But if they have a kid ,it is hard to take care of him ,need anyone who bring up the kid.
>>> But if they have a kid, it will be hard to take care of him and they may need someone to help them bring their child up. 
Modern society require working parents, also supporting for the kid at work.
>>> Modern society requires two working parents to support a kid.
To work both, they have to share housework and respect each other.
>>> For this to work out, they have to share housework and respect each other.


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