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What is one most memorable celebration in your life?

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For me, the wedding ceremony is the most special event in my life. Unlike most women in those days, I got marriage at late age. At that time, before I met my husband I thought I want to live alone freely without getting marriage. So it was really special for me. I mean I wanted to look younger and I did massage on my face for a while and even I was on diet to look slimmer and cuter.
Apart from that, the wedding ceremony is not common to ordinary people. It happens about once time to people. Therefore, wedding anniversary is quite an occasion not only to me but also to my better half.

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Hi there Jane! 

Wedding is a milestone in a couple's life to seal the deal to eternity. Not all people are lucky to find someone they can be with forever. Getting married is every woman's dream. Thus, every year during your anniversary is a gift to celebrate your love. 

I wish you a blissful marriage always.

Thanks for this answer. I shall see you in class tonight.

-T. Donna =)

For me, the wedding ceremony is the most special event in my life. 
>> Correct!

Unlike most women in those days, I got marriage at late age. 
>> Unlike most women in those days, I got marriage at a late age. 

At that time, before I met my husband I thought I want to live alone freely without getting marriage. 
>> At that time, before I met my husband I thought I want to live alone freely without getting marriage. 

So it was really special for me. 
>> Correct!

I mean I wanted to look younger and I did massage on my face for a while and even I was on diet to look slimmer and cuter.
>> Correct!

Apart from that, the wedding ceremony is not common to ordinary people. 
>> Correct!

It happens about once time to people. 
>>It happens about once to people.  

Therefore, wedding anniversary is quite an occasion not only to me but also to my better half.
>> Correct!
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