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Do you believe that there are many things in our universe that cannot be explained? Give examples.
-> absolutely yes! It make no sense what if among universe, even animate being is in the only Earth. Whether if the supposition is true, it depends creepy. Because the universe is so extensive. I believe in extra alien, even if it is very tiny. For example, i read a newspaper then i recognized the NASA announced on thing of Mars. The thing was very nano but it had ¡®DNA¡¯. But the news didn¡¯t become a event. Perhaps, That¡¯s why some of the people feel like no interested or can¡¯t believe. Anyways, these newses make me more excited feelings. I¡¯m sure that human being will find inconceivable thing in vast universe!

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Do you believe that there are many things in our universe that cannot be explained? Give examples.
-> absolutely yes! 
>> Absolutely yes! 
It make no sense what if among universe, even animate being is in the only Earth. 
>> It makes no sense if only animate beings are present on Earth.
Whether if the supposition is true, it depends creepy. 
>> If the supposition is true, it feels creepy. 
Because the universe is so extensive. 
>> Correct.
I believe in extra alien, even if it is very tiny. 
>> I believe in aliens, even if they are very tiny. 
For example, i read a newspaper then i recognized the NASA announced on thing of Mars. 
>> For example, when I read the newspaper, I found out that NASA gives some information about Mars.
The thing was very nano but it had ¡®DNA¡¯. But the news didn¡¯t become a event. 
>> Even if it was very small/minute, it had DNA. But the news did not become controversial.
Perhaps, That¡¯s why some of the people feel like no interested or can¡¯t believe. 
>> Perhaps, that's the reason why some people are not interested or do not believe it.
Anyways, these newses make me more excited feelings. 
>> Anyway, this type of news makes me feel more excited.
I¡¯m sure that human being will find inconceivable thing in vast universe!
>> I¡¯m sure that human beings will find inconceivable things in the vast universe!
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