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Q:Is making eye contact important in your culture?
A:Yes, making eye contact is important in our culture.
First, if I don't make eye contact when I'm talking with someone, then the person will think 'he doesn't want to talk with me'.
Second, my parents said not making eye contact when you are talking is not good.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Yes, making eye contact is important in our culture.

>> CORRECT!
First, if I don't make eye contact when I'm talking with someone, then the person will think 'he doesn't want to talk with me'.

>> First, if I don't make eye contact when I'm talking with someone, then the person will think, "He doesn't want to talk with me".
Second, my parents said not making eye contact when you are talking is not good.

>> CORRECT!

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