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What is are differences between education in Korea and education abroad?

작성자: 류*주
2021-07-29 339

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Korea education and education abroad can be seen very similer but I think there are a lot of difference.
First, I don't know the reason but in Korea, a lot of students just memorizing something and they don't understand it.
There are some schools that think understanding is important and some schools don't.
But I can't understand some schools that think memorizing is important because I think understanding is more important than it.
And actually, a lot of academies taught students just memorize somethings.
Second, I can't understand it but we learn same things if our age is same as the others.
I think we have to learn different things if each has different abilities but Korea don't let us do it.
I think those things are different with education abroad and I think the goverment have to change some educations for students.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi John! ^^

Both of them have different ways. That's true. 

Studying in your home country has many advantages. First of all, you do not have to plan a temporary stay abroad and learn another language. So you can fully focus on your studies instead of learning vocabulary

Studying abroad helps you to learn new languages, appreciate other cultures, overcome challenges of living in another country and gain a greater understanding of the world. These are all things that modern businesses look for when hiring, and such traits will only become more important in the future.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

Korea education and education abroad can be seen very similer but I think there are a lot of difference.
>> Korea education and education abroad can be seen very similarly but I think there is still a lot of differences. 

First, I don't know the reason but in Korea, a lot of students just memorizing something and they don't understand it.
>>First, I don't know the reason but in Korea, a lot of students just memorize lessons and they don't understand it.

There are some schools that think understanding is important and some schools don't.
>>There are some schools think that understanding is important and there are some that don't. 

But I can't understand some schools that think memorizing is important because I think understanding is more important than it.
>> I don't know why some schools think that memorizing is important. I think understanding is more important than it.

And actually, a lot of academies taught students just memorize somethings.
>> A lot of academies teach students to just memorize lessons.

Second, I can't understand it but we learn same things if our age is same as the others.
>>I don't understand it but we should learn the same things as others. 

I think we have to learn different things if each has different abilities but Korea don't let us do it.
>>I think we have to learn different things if each has different abilities but Korea doesn't let us do it. 

I think those things are different with education abroad and I think the goverment have to change some educations for students.
>>I think those things are different with education abroad and I think the government has to change it. 

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