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Most of my hobbies and free time are things that I can do without thinking, such as doing puzzles or coloring while listening to music in a quiet place. So, just looking at the house coures, I don't like things that are too extensive or difficult to do, such as washing a car or washing the floor. So I think it's good to do, such as washing dishes, organizing bookshelves or warehouses, and organizing desks, etc, I love doing step by step^^

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Hello Maria, happy Friday once again! 

Doing chores can be taxing, however, we can learn the step by step process of accomplishing them and these are vital to our practice when we have work when we become adults. Everything we do actually has to undergo a certain process. So doing some little chores every now and then helps us understand what we need to finish and how to get it done.

I wish you patience in doing your household chores!

Thanks for accomplishing this task.

-T. Donna =)

Most of my hobbies and free time are things that I can do without thinking, such as doing puzzles or coloring while listening to music in a quiet place. 
>> Correct!

So, just looking at the house coures, I don't like things that are too extensive or difficult to do, such as washing a car or washing the floor. 
>> So, just looking at the house chores, I don't like things that are too extensive or difficult to do such as washing the car or washing the floor. 

So I think it's good to do, such as washing dishes, organizing bookshelves or warehouses, and organizing desks, etc, I love doing step by step^^
>> So I think it's good to do chores such as washing dishes, organizing bookshelves or warehouses, and organizing desks, etc. I love doing these step by step.
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