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yes day

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2021-07-30 737

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When me and my little sister watched a movie called yes day we wanted to have yes day too. So me and my little sister bothered mom and dad. So they said that we can have are yes day in saturday and we can have 30000won to buy something. Now me and my little sister is so exciting! Because tomarow is yes day! So we planed yes day, we get up at 5 (which is very early) and play morning board game.(because will play at the morning and even though there isn`t a some kind like morning board game it will be wierd. anyway t there will be afternoon board game and night board game is just when will play it) And We have break fast at 6 and we read a book at 7 then when it`s 8 we play many things with toys,us and mom and dad. When it`s 10 will watch movie and eat lunch when movie ends we have little rest and do drawing competition. And do the afternoon board game and we`ll do my little sisters market. Then make dinner eat them we'll start making dinner at 6.I can`t write more please see wednesday

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you Seung Ju for sending me this plan you have for tomorrow. ^_^ Enjoy!
T. Irene
When me and my little sister watched a movie called yes day we wanted to have yes day too. 
>>> When my sister and I watched a movie called "Yes Day", we wanted to have our own yes-day too. 
So me and my little sister bothered mom and dad. 
>> So we talked to our mom and dad. 
So they said that we can have are yes day in saturday and we can have 30000won to buy something. 
>>> They agreed to give a a yes-day on Saturday and we can also have 30,000 Won to buy anything we want. 
Now me and my little sister is so exciting! Because tomarow is yes day! 
>>> We are so excited because that will be tomorrow already!
So we planed yes day, we get up at 5 (which is very early) and play morning board game.
>>> We made plans for our yes-day. We will wake up at 5 am, which is very early, and play board games with our parents. 
(because will play at the morning and even though there isn`t a some kind like morning board game it will be wierd. anyway t there will be afternoon board game and night board game is just when will play it) 
>>> It's kinda weird because there really isn't any morning board game. Anyway, it's the same as the afternoon and night board games that we have been playing. 
And We have break fast at 6 and we read a book at 7 then when it`s 8 we play many things with toys,us and mom and dad. 
>>> We will eat breakfast at 6 am, read a book at 7am then play toys with mom and dad at 8am. 
When it`s 10 will watch movie and eat lunch when movie ends we have little rest and do drawing competition. 
>>> At 10 am, we will watch a movie while eating lunch then take a rest for a while. While resting, we can have a drawing competition too. 
And do the afternoon board game and we`ll do my little sisters market. 
>>> After playing some afternoon board games, we will go to the market to buy ingredients for dinner. 
Then make dinner eat them we'll start making dinner at 6.I can`t write more please see wednesday
>>> We will then start cooking dinner at 6pm. 
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