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1. What are you plans?
I have the plans. That is going abroad first when Covid19 is overcame and be working out hard to take care of my health.

2. How important is planning for our future?
Being plan is important to achieve our dream and hope for our future. That would be confident for us what we have something to do.

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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!

1. What are you plans?
I have the plans. 
>>> I have plans.   
That is going abroad first when Covid19 is overcame and be working out hard to take care of my health.
>>That is going abroad first when Covid19 is over and be working out hard to take care of my health.   
2. How important is planning for our future?
Being plan is important to achieve our dream and hope for our future. 
>>>  Having a plan is important to achieve our dream and hope for our future.   
That would be confident for us what we have something to do.
>>>  That would give us confidence with everything we have to do.  

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